tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post1788413611676984233..comments2024-03-29T07:40:54.130-06:00Comments on TeacherDance: April - Poetry Month - Day Ten - Random Visitor Plus the Progressive Poem ContinuesLinda Bhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14983144542632353870noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-34713017485681137462022-04-17T19:13:58.104-06:002022-04-17T19:13:58.104-06:00Way to shake things up a bit, Linda - wonderful! :...Way to shake things up a bit, Linda - wonderful! :0) And thanks for sharing your gift of a surprise springtime balloon, inspiring a poem no less... Robyn Hood Blackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07279289715664168026noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-36611662951936205052022-04-12T18:43:13.149-06:002022-04-12T18:43:13.149-06:00I like your turn, reflection, and bringing additio...I like your turn, reflection, and bringing additional voices!<br /><br />And what a fun poem that grew from that small purple balloon, and nice that it took time to take you in…Michelle Koganhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02575814872372518994noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-43592928488890327952022-04-11T16:53:40.769-06:002022-04-11T16:53:40.769-06:00Love your purple delight poem. Glad to see the poe...Love your purple delight poem. Glad to see the poem take a pivot. It will be fun to watch the fun unfold. Ramonahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15929914252480696798noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-83879377078501185822022-04-11T08:03:04.271-06:002022-04-11T08:03:04.271-06:00What a fun treasure you found, the purple balloon ...What a fun treasure you found, the purple balloon in a precarious place. I like your next line for the poem. I wonder who is there.Denise Krebshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00583406241247334445noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-49557682505886841572022-04-10T22:54:00.623-06:002022-04-10T22:54:00.623-06:00Linda, I read your poem early this morning, then w...Linda, I read your poem early this morning, then we went to church. So tonight is the first time I had to comment. I want you to know that your response to my line was just right. You set up a fine mystery. I cannot wait to see what Janet comes up with and then, Jone who has been waiting. Have a great week.Carol Varsalonahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02589714711155938528noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-18335485932743351852022-04-10T18:49:56.638-06:002022-04-10T18:49:56.638-06:00More voices! How exciting! Thanks for a great line...More voices! How exciting! Thanks for a great line. Ruthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12463332371535167975noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-85590756539542593842022-04-10T15:20:29.994-06:002022-04-10T15:20:29.994-06:00I love how you recognized a need for a turn and to...I love how you recognized a need for a turn and took it. Our adventure continues! Thanks! Margaret Simonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04434866104385187658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-86710903563022259122022-04-10T14:41:15.082-06:002022-04-10T14:41:15.082-06:00Good decision to take a turn in the progressive po...Good decision to take a turn in the progressive poem. And glad your balloon visitor gave delight--and a poem!Buffy Silvermanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07223895917772531703noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-36452116576113719712022-04-10T09:15:13.229-06:002022-04-10T09:15:13.229-06:00Oh, love that balloon treasure! A real delight! ...Oh, love that balloon treasure! A real delight! I was hoping the poem would start to have an adventure! Yay!Donna Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13738281869266957726noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-76414683408615382262022-04-10T06:36:26.275-06:002022-04-10T06:36:26.275-06:00Perfection! And your balloon poem works so nicely ...Perfection! And your balloon poem works so nicely with the idea behind the progressive poem!Mary Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09078793537148794310noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-21736434460742233602022-04-10T06:12:06.901-06:002022-04-10T06:12:06.901-06:00Oh, yes! Linda, thanks for opening up the question...Oh, yes! Linda, thanks for opening up the question of setting and characters (we might be a little heavy on plot this year so far!). And look how that purple balloon glows out of all the wintry browns, and how you captured a momentary treasure and then shared it forward. Lovely!Heidi Mordhorsthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16496427007514895950noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-33858134993967865612022-04-10T06:05:31.118-06:002022-04-10T06:05:31.118-06:00This is my first chance to pop in and catch the Pr...This is my first chance to pop in and catch the Progressive Poem (I was so sorry to miss it this year - but just could not...) It looks like a fun theme - and I love your disruption. Perfectly done!<br />(Also, I am amazed by the resilience of your purple balloon! It doesn't look like a likely landing spot - and yet...)KatApel - katswhiskers.wordpress.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01297639228969549518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-53691089477556438592022-04-10T06:04:00.831-06:002022-04-10T06:04:00.831-06:00I can't wait to find out who else is singing! ...I can't wait to find out who else is singing! I'm hoping for birds or frogs. I guess we shall see! Your poem reminds me of Wendell Berry's "Window Poems," Linda. The life of a balloon is random, I guess, in so many ways. Well done! -- ChristieMrs. Wymanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17580085844427332905noreply@blogger.com