tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post3930928057434548778..comments2024-03-29T06:51:58.133-06:00Comments on TeacherDance: Lovely SundaysLinda Bhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14983144542632353870noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-14660844861097523212011-03-13T22:03:07.768-06:002011-03-13T22:03:07.768-06:00Your lovely, lovely poem has inspired me to try so...Your lovely, lovely poem has inspired me to try some poetry myself. I don't share that as easily as I do my other writing. Thank you for the nudge!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13960460295877416918noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-15825343723239959662011-03-13T20:58:47.286-06:002011-03-13T20:58:47.286-06:00I like how the image "I warm my hands around ...I like how the image "I warm my hands around the coffee mug and look out at the feeder," communicates so much more than what you are doing. I get a sense of the contentment you feel about where you are in time and space through that image. Beautiful language!Christy Rush-Levinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15581876400990779210noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-82717291081148996532011-03-13T17:50:55.708-06:002011-03-13T17:50:55.708-06:00Elsie said my first thought - the one word on each...Elsie said my first thought - the one word on each line really slowed me down to give a feel of your day. Isn't it fun to practice your writing through the SOL? Enjoyed.:)MaryHelenAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-82854327404403255442011-03-13T12:07:00.395-06:002011-03-13T12:07:00.395-06:00I liked the start,
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slows ...I liked the start,<br />each <br />word <br />on <br />a <br />line,<br />slows the reading down until you get to the list. Looks like you've got a winner for your poetry group!elsiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01348895330633879894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-21986817752457507942011-03-13T10:29:47.692-06:002011-03-13T10:29:47.692-06:00That was my favorite part too! Then I got down to...That was my favorite part too! Then I got down to David Brooks' column and went to hunt for it on the internet before writing this comment. I got sidetracked twice again and went to watch our finches tittering in and out of our spruce tree. I'm so distractable this morning - must be the March madness!CSPetersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16346186856994152730noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-17648513393920162462011-03-13T09:37:43.478-06:002011-03-13T09:37:43.478-06:00Nice--- I especially like the line " house gh...Nice--- I especially like the line " house ghosts cry for teddy bear pancakes, cinnamon sugar syrup, funnies".Deb Dayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00861392500601183208noreply@blogger.com