tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post8201888970089358608..comments2024-03-26T09:20:29.620-06:00Comments on TeacherDance: Progressive Poem Arrives - Line 24Linda Bhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14983144542632353870noreply@blogger.comBlogger28125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-79048212482594574892014-04-25T16:20:57.728-06:002014-04-25T16:20:57.728-06:00Thanks, Catherine. It seemed like a walking, campi...Thanks, Catherine. It seemed like a walking, camping journey to me, hence the fire. Excited to see what's next after Michelle's boy appeared!Linda Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14983144542632353870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-80485195023232441162014-04-25T12:03:19.039-06:002014-04-25T12:03:19.039-06:00I love that you brought a campfire into it, Linda....I love that you brought a campfire into it, Linda. All adventures should have campfires in. And great suspense to pass on too.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-84629312167312591202014-04-24T20:01:50.192-06:002014-04-24T20:01:50.192-06:00Ha! What a wonderful thought, Matt. But I guess yo...Ha! What a wonderful thought, Matt. But I guess you would have to be the next writer, then, for that notion. Thanks for the comment. There's so little time to go that I am really wondering how it will all turn out! Linda Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14983144542632353870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-79267826299103905602014-04-24T19:57:29.732-06:002014-04-24T19:57:29.732-06:00I really liked Amy's line and was wondering wh...I really liked Amy's line and was wondering what you'd do with it - well done! Intriguing, with internal rhyme and a surprise...can't wait to find out who the guest is! (I have to admit, the image of a campfire reminded me of our highlights workshop - could the guest be David, banging the bongos??)Matt Forrest Esenwinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04230063389130167424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-7777338746359939632014-04-24T12:06:36.068-06:002014-04-24T12:06:36.068-06:00Me, too. I'm sure she already has a terrific i...Me, too. I'm sure she already has a terrific idea! Thanks, Robyn!Linda Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14983144542632353870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-20640005134463910432014-04-24T12:06:02.810-06:002014-04-24T12:06:02.810-06:00Up to Michelle now. It's rather fun handing of...Up to Michelle now. It's rather fun handing off something like this, isn't it? Thanks, Buffy!Linda Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14983144542632353870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-2723391933135759812014-04-24T12:05:07.323-06:002014-04-24T12:05:07.323-06:00I bet you're really wondering what's going...I bet you're really wondering what's going to happen, Tara, since you are in charge of wrapping every thing up in a tidy package, or may not so tidy? Thanks!Linda Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14983144542632353870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-29590798372330052812014-04-24T11:31:52.659-06:002014-04-24T11:31:52.659-06:00Ahhh - shadowy intrigue. What fun, Linda! Thanks...Ahhh - shadowy intrigue. What fun, Linda! Thanks, and I wonder what Michelle will make of it? Robyn Hood Blackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07279289715664168026noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-63857298873854556432014-04-24T11:30:21.076-06:002014-04-24T11:30:21.076-06:00I read it first without noticing the title - that&...I read it first without noticing the title - that's just great, and one I didn't know. Thanks, Laura!Robyn Hood Blackhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07279289715664168026noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-23994557776409291032014-04-24T10:19:10.583-06:002014-04-24T10:19:10.583-06:00Ah a guest (now that we've thrown off those be...Ah a guest (now that we've thrown off those beasties!) I wonder who it will be? Buffy Silvermanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07223895917772531703noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-59858551676118625982014-04-24T09:38:24.228-06:002014-04-24T09:38:24.228-06:00Oooh...mysterious and yet (perhaps) welcome...you&...Oooh...mysterious and yet (perhaps) welcome...you've opened up new avenues for those of us at the end of this poem's journey, Linda!Tarahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13626451110946889157noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-74352609868222815662014-04-24T08:52:06.106-06:002014-04-24T08:52:06.106-06:00What a great little poem! Thanks from me too for s...What a great little poem! Thanks from me too for sharing.Michelle Heidenrich Barneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02051827857519159837noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-48273089187702274542014-04-24T07:02:06.336-06:002014-04-24T07:02:06.336-06:00And will the guest finish the journey with our tra...And will the guest finish the journey with our traveler? I can't wait either, Donna. Thanks!Linda Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14983144542632353870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-44735291424803991352014-04-24T06:43:34.876-06:002014-04-24T06:43:34.876-06:00A guest! A guest! Has this guest been following a...A guest! A guest! Has this guest been following and there all along, or is has our character come into their area? Maybe the guest is hungry! Hey, we could cook eggs over the campfire! I can hardly wait to see what happens!Donna Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13738281869266957726noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-73542938596218791872014-04-24T06:32:28.962-06:002014-04-24T06:32:28.962-06:00I agree, Janet, the poem is wonderful. Thanks!I agree, Janet, the poem is wonderful. Thanks!Linda Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14983144542632353870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-45571274927028239672014-04-24T06:28:57.735-06:002014-04-24T06:28:57.735-06:00Wonderful story, we've been 'guessing'...Wonderful story, we've been 'guessing' with Irene as host all month, haven't we?Linda Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14983144542632353870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-22851017931557623002014-04-24T06:28:16.330-06:002014-04-24T06:28:16.330-06:00Perfect for this! A guess of a guest is next!Perfect for this! A guess of a guest is next!Donna Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13738281869266957726noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-89960420522022113582014-04-24T06:28:13.050-06:002014-04-24T06:28:13.050-06:00That's beautiful, Laura. Thank you for sharing...That's beautiful, Laura. Thank you for sharing. I don't know it, and now am happy to have it.Linda Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14983144542632353870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-47268322563900928512014-04-24T06:27:12.278-06:002014-04-24T06:27:12.278-06:00Thanks Irene, love thinking of the autobahn and th...Thanks Irene, love thinking of the autobahn and the hurry for this traveler. Can't wait to see!Linda Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14983144542632353870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-59118181662013580072014-04-24T06:25:31.863-06:002014-04-24T06:25:31.863-06:00I know, I thought a bit that way too, Michelle, bu...I know, I thought a bit that way too, Michelle, but can't wait to see where you take us next! I'm sure it will be exciting!Linda Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14983144542632353870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-21596151299005079112014-04-24T06:24:24.010-06:002014-04-24T06:24:24.010-06:00Thanks Amy, these final few days are going to be f...Thanks Amy, these final few days are going to be fun!Linda Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14983144542632353870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-20345419369498529002014-04-24T06:24:16.818-06:002014-04-24T06:24:16.818-06:00* from Janet F.* from Janet F.skanny17https://www.blogger.com/profile/07488350213473016250noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-70049651735043324882014-04-24T06:22:46.886-06:002014-04-24T06:22:46.886-06:00Oh Linda I love the campfire and the guest! And La...Oh Linda I love the campfire and the guest! And Laura, I am saving this poem by Gary Snyder. I love how he captures this/his(?) writing process. It's like the itch I feel when a poem comes to life. I often get my best ideas at night. Thanks to you both for such a nice start to the day.skanny17https://www.blogger.com/profile/07488350213473016250noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-46650457021932413212014-04-24T06:15:51.188-06:002014-04-24T06:15:51.188-06:00Ah, the campfire warms and then a guest arrives. ...Ah, the campfire warms and then a guest arrives. Makes me think of a sign I saw in a local Vietnamese restaurant that invites "the guesses" to come to a Cambodian festival. You have invited a guess. Margaret Simonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04434866104385187658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-7159902745277567752014-04-24T05:34:00.586-06:002014-04-24T05:34:00.586-06:00Exciting! Your line reminded me of this small poem...Exciting! Your line reminded me of this small poem by Gary Snyder:<br /><br />How Poetry Comes to Me<br /><br />It comes blundering over the<br />Boulders at night, it stays<br />Frightened outside the<br />Range of my campfire<br />I go to meet it at the<br />Edge of the lightAuthor Amokhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13636391982938592789noreply@blogger.com