tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post955531621459675415..comments2024-03-26T09:20:29.620-06:00Comments on TeacherDance: Progressive Poem - Day 24Linda Bhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14983144542632353870noreply@blogger.comBlogger28125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-73801715169236610452012-04-27T03:40:07.163-06:002012-04-27T03:40:07.163-06:00Slices in March. Poems in April. What will May bri...Slices in March. Poems in April. What will May bring?Kristi Lonheimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16541224246393137201noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-38787287671331350962012-04-25T21:33:21.922-06:002012-04-25T21:33:21.922-06:00Love the line, Linda!!Love the line, Linda!!Lori Degmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13431302924584172655noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-38910767141238588692012-04-25T06:18:54.976-06:002012-04-25T06:18:54.976-06:00Thanks for the wonderful comments everyone! I'...Thanks for the wonderful comments everyone! I'm sorry I didn't have time to reply to each. I am looking forward to seeing what Greg's clever writing will bring to the poem.Linda Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14983144542632353870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-53158191319163702092012-04-25T05:25:06.094-06:002012-04-25T05:25:06.094-06:00Oh Linda, allow me to gush at your line: Absolutel...Oh Linda, allow me to gush at your line: Absolutely Brilliant! I love LEAP! I wonder how Greg would continue this one, this poem is turning out to be such a thing of beauty.<br /><br />I have just given a talk this afternoon on kidlit and using the web as a resource to a group of (mostly American) teachers in an international school here in Singapore, and I made mention of your blog. Hopefully they drop by and say hello. :)GatheringBookshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04477710897574769648noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-38198937125337644462012-04-25T03:38:45.591-06:002012-04-25T03:38:45.591-06:00Leap! Love where the poem has gone. This morning i...Leap! Love where the poem has gone. This morning it reminded me of write and pass progressive pieces I used to do with high school writing club students-how much more fun with the larger community online!Lee Ann Spillanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04650009312001849617noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-80331327350014432922012-04-25T00:48:55.489-06:002012-04-25T00:48:55.489-06:00I have been mulling and mulling. I'll be posti...I have been mulling and mulling. I'll be posting in the morning, California time. And no early hints from me! :-)Greg Pincushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00449684160718426340noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-63497751353860598682012-04-24T20:10:02.556-06:002012-04-24T20:10:02.556-06:00Perfect! This poem is more exciting everyday. It i...Perfect! This poem is more exciting everyday. It is amazing that 24 different poets have contributed.Penny Parker Klostermannhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15043861965501388155noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-30995865784823053842012-04-24T18:54:47.651-06:002012-04-24T18:54:47.651-06:00This is fun to read and fun to try on each line......This is fun to read and fun to try on each line...where might I have gone? Certainly nowhere as clever as you! I love the line before yours too. You did well to let the list of instructions propel the story forward with a leap!Christy Rush-Levinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15581876400990779210noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-46227271038933406262012-04-24T18:42:49.938-06:002012-04-24T18:42:49.938-06:00I have been loving this poem each time I check in ...I have been loving this poem each time I check in on its progress and I have been so excited for your day to arrive! As I expected, you did not disappoint. Your addition is fantastic and I love that it ends with "leap," one of my favorite words!Betsy Hubbardhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10492340502962987362noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-34488023879788278492012-04-24T18:21:26.899-06:002012-04-24T18:21:26.899-06:00A very comforting line, Linda, and it fits well wi...A very comforting line, Linda, and it fits well with the line before it!Tabathahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14367572663591077922noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-23697608957742965032012-04-24T18:06:19.870-06:002012-04-24T18:06:19.870-06:00What a lovely and comforting image. PERFECT! ;)What a lovely and comforting image. PERFECT! ;)Nataliehttp://www.wadingthroughwords.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-9265500151793837772012-04-24T17:45:41.402-06:002012-04-24T17:45:41.402-06:00I like the linebreaks you chose, Linda. I felt a r...I like the linebreaks you chose, Linda. I felt a real drawing in as I read it today. The words seem to wash me along and pull me into the poem. What a wonderful collaboration. It would be nice to see what a classroom of children who tackled this with a purposeful plan could achieve, though they might be too impatient to wait an entire month.....I am having trouble waiting now. Thank you to all the poets. Janet F.skanny17https://www.blogger.com/profile/07488350213473016250noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-79787459479735069372012-04-24T17:26:05.170-06:002012-04-24T17:26:05.170-06:00Ooh, what a fun idea! I love the way that everyon...Ooh, what a fun idea! I love the way that everyone's ideas are combining to shape and change the path of the poem. And your line is awesome -- "leap" is such a strong word!JenniferMhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09603450967368808356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-34876738587374549592012-04-24T17:14:00.404-06:002012-04-24T17:14:00.404-06:00Yes, a leap! Well played, Linda!Yes, a leap! Well played, Linda!Renee LaTulippehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13520719663052253627noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-9292573422030462682012-04-24T16:41:40.741-06:002012-04-24T16:41:40.741-06:00What a cool way to write poetry collaboratively. ...What a cool way to write poetry collaboratively. <br />Love it Linda,<br />BonnieBonnie Khttp://digitalbonnie.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-10231841798499162242012-04-24T16:31:16.656-06:002012-04-24T16:31:16.656-06:00Loving the word choices!
Thanks for sharing...
M...Loving the word choices! <br /><br />Thanks for sharing...<br /><a href="http://mrschock.blogspot.com/" rel="nofollow">Mandy @ The Chockboard</a>Mandyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12036205610335540782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-66159330381906491842012-04-24T16:11:11.061-06:002012-04-24T16:11:11.061-06:00Lovely! There is such comfort in that line....and...Lovely! There is such comfort in that line....and to leave off with leaping...excellent!!Tara @ A Teaching Lifehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07195982194362559883noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-35657833474850983622012-04-24T14:41:35.945-06:002012-04-24T14:41:35.945-06:00Leaping! Yes. Love where this is going.Leaping! Yes. Love where this is going.Dorainehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04421672075192660319noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-998710515353271912012-04-24T13:55:26.362-06:002012-04-24T13:55:26.362-06:00Before today, I did not know that there had to be ...Before today, I did not know that there had to be a leap. Now it could not be any other way! Leap with trust! Indeed. a.Amy LVhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16625469276544426664noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-14632648502559270642012-04-24T13:14:05.706-06:002012-04-24T13:14:05.706-06:00Dear Linda - wonderful, wonderful, this leap into ...Dear Linda - wonderful, wonderful, this leap into the unknown... thank you so much for your contribution! I'm excited to see what tomorrow brings!Irene Lathamhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04905936104127707762noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-58538999739788646282012-04-24T10:56:26.585-06:002012-04-24T10:56:26.585-06:00I am curious how you would have finished the poem ...I am curious how you would have finished the poem yourself. It is unbelievable that a poem can grow day by day through different poets.Terje https://www.blogger.com/profile/13569210226711674834noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-3351623797074585942012-04-24T10:38:03.759-06:002012-04-24T10:38:03.759-06:00Ooooh - a leap! Perfect! Great job, Linda. Look...Ooooh - a leap! Perfect! Great job, Linda. Looking forward to seeing where this line lands.Robyn Hood Blackhttp://www.robynhoodblack.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-63532586156990832152012-04-24T08:19:53.786-06:002012-04-24T08:19:53.786-06:00Inspiring line, Linda. Love it!
I laughed when I r...Inspiring line, Linda. Love it!<br />I laughed when I read Donna's comment above. No pressure at all - haha.Sheri Doylehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14653834734547794502noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-59143088704548913552012-04-24T07:57:56.255-06:002012-04-24T07:57:56.255-06:00Leap into _____? What a great addition and opening...Leap into _____? What a great addition and opening for the next writer. I'm so glad today is your day so I can see how the poem moved after Tara's line. You are so good at gathering resources, thank you!elsiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01348895330633879894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-319624163132382197.post-55757381931298231812012-04-24T07:57:38.375-06:002012-04-24T07:57:38.375-06:00Oh, that was a great line, Linda! Now what will C...Oh, that was a great line, Linda! Now what will Caroline, Sheri and Irene do with that...a great start to the ending scene! No pressure on them! Ha! Got to read this ending! Sweet. And what fun!Donna Smithhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13738281869266957726noreply@blogger.com