My older granddaughter's teacher last year in second grade used Sharon Creech's Love That Dog to begin their poetry study. It was the class read aloud and an immersion in all the poets and poetry Creech put into the book. I know it started Ingrid into her own writing, but also a new idea, different poets wrote in different ways, so she could, too!
Last week, Michelle interviewed Nikki Grimes, sharing two poems, from Nikki's book, Bronx Masquerade, and another from her newest book, Between The Lines. These were poems Michelle also had shared in her recent teaching experience of students from Sequel Residential, a juvenile facility. And a poem from one of the students there was shared, from one who goes by the pen name, Lil Fujjii. That poem, "blurred lines" touched me. The TLD challenge for the month from Nikki is to write a Golden Shovel poem, but restrict it to lines from the three poems only. Nikki's book One Last Word fascinated me. I think I read it several times by the time I had made it to the end, re-reading, trying to see how she wove her own words while giving beautiful homage to the other poets' words, too.
Though I haven't shared many, I did share one on the TLD Padlet this week, and now I've written another. The Parkland tragedy continues to be heavy on my mind. I know grief in a number of ways, know that everyone handles it in very personal ways, and all deserve respect for that. Within a family, expectations of what is "right" can loom large, and I hold great sympathy for the families in Florida who have lost beloved family members.
from Lil Fujjii's poem, "blurred lines".
Listen
Evening fatigue, voices rise. I listen
but look out at the sky to
find a way to quiet the sound my
breaking breath makes of their story.
He loses all patience when and if
she cannot comply, says, “You
grieve in all the ways I can’t”.
I scream inside but here I just
choose quiet, quiet, knowing no one will listen
when I bravely go to bed to
face the dreams--not my
dreams, after all--no longer idyllic rhymes.
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