Tuesday, July 26, 2011

Lots of People Write About Shoes

Slice of Life Tuesday, July 26, 2011



             One of the pleasures of teaching writing is finding satisfying lessons that give writers ideas to play around with in their writers notebooks.  In addition to the bone, heart or hand lesson that Ruth and Stacey at Two Writing Teachers and Ruth Ayres Writes have written about in different posts, some beginning lessons can be more specific.   In workshop, although I offer the ideas, they still remain a choice, but I do ask students to jot down some ideas about the topic that would help them return to it if desired.  The topics presented help students jumpstart their memories of things important in their pasts, like particular events connected to food, travel, siblings, birthdays, etc.  Sometimes in class, we just have conversations in order to share favorite memories, and then I might send students off to record what the talk helped them remember that was important.  And other times I’ve collected prose and poetry pieces to share about a topic that might spark an idea.  One of those topics I’ve found of continuing interest for students is shoes.  Through the years, I’ve managed to collect a few pieces about shoes, and students always seemed to have a personal story to tell about shoes in their lives.  

Here are some poems I’ve collected about shoes and the links or directions for finding:

“Shoes”  ~Cynthia Rylant  from Something Permanent by Rylant and Walker Evans
“Johnny Laces Up His Red Shoes” ~Cornelius Edy
“The Need for Shoes” ~Molly Bendall
“New Shoes” ~Linda Hogan  from Earth power coming : short fiction in native American
literature    Simon J. Ortiz, ed.
“Bound Feet” ~Janet S. Wong, from Good Luck Gold and Other Poems


           And here is my own memory:

            There was a lovely pair of red shoes that I spied in a shop window, red flats that would make me a star to others, and let them know that I was a grown-up girl, ready to give up the socks and tie shoes I had worn almost all my grade school years.  We didn’t have a lot of money when I was growing up, but every time we went into the big town near the little town where I lived, I managed to walk by this store for a peek in the window.  These weren’t the times when children begged and begged until their parents bought what they wanted.   Only three times during the year did I receive things:  Christmas, my birthday, and the beginning of school.  It was not even near the time for any of those days when I saw the red shoes.  I didn’t say anything to family about the shoes, but I kept a diary and a sketchbook as I grew up, and I wrote about them, along with sketching them.  When I sketched, I put them on a young girl and dressed her up quite well!  I sketched her with the shoes more than one time, and my mother must have seen the pictures.  One day, when I opened my closet, there, along with my pair of brown tie shoes, sat the red ones.  I turned around and there was my mother, watching.  I believe her smile was as big as mine.   The shoes were such a surprise because I hadn’t even realized that anyone had noticed how much I had wished for them.  I remember wearing them and wearing them.  They were just perfect, although I did get a few blisters from all the wearing, and parts of my feet turned red for a while from the dye.  I didn’t care; I had my grown-up red shoes! 

Monday, July 25, 2011

Old TVs and Teaching

Monday, July 25, 2011



        This past week we had a wonderful guest, a friend from college.  We keep in touch and see each other every few years.  She is from Boston, and along with visiting her in Boston with my husband, I’ve been lucky enough to see her also when I traveled there with students.  We spent the past four days visiting, catching up, sharing details about our own children and their spouses, and much about our grandchildren.  Her oldest is now in college while mine is just finishing elementary school.  It was great to re-connect and to have so many hours of talk, about old times we shared and some things I didn’t know she had accomplished in her career, about today’s times, and what is going on right now. 
One funny story my friend told  happened last year when she called a tech person to her house to help her connect the black box to her old TV so it could convert from analog to digital feeds.  She said that he kept turning her TV off and on, off and on, and finally said he thought it was broken.  She told him to just turn it on and wait a minute to give it time to warm up.  He looked at her quizzically, not sure what she meant. He’d never heard the term, warming up.  She did some quick calculations and realized that her TV was possibly older than this young man, and had never seen anything that wasn’t an immediate turn-on.  We laughed and talked about some other things where this might possibly apply.
Since then, I’ve been wondering if I use any words in the classroom when students have no idea what I’m referring to?  Could it be that connecting with certain old things metaphorically is so out of date that students today would have to do some quick research in order to understand, or need some quick explanation?   It may be important as a teacher to understand that if one is a generation or more older than students, or even some colleagues, conversation can grow to be awkward sometimes.   It’s like thinking about Clark Kent, and wondering where he might change into Superman when all the pay phone boxes have disappeared.  What in our world will he do?  Or, in the song “The Telephone Hour” from the musical “Bye, Bye Birdie” some of the lines wouldn’t make sense, except that because they are brief enough, I suppose today they could be sent in a text.  The song can be found here.  Does “pinning” still happen?  Does anyone “go steady” today?  I believe my middle school students just say “going with”.   One final example concerns another form of communication, slow mail.  From my earliest teen-age days, I remember a Pat Boone song, “Love Letters In The Sand”.  Has someone already written a song about heartache from a tweet?  I’m not sure, but when we teach about metaphor in our writing lessons, perhaps we should begin to find new connections for student lives today.  I hope readers will think of other examples.

Friday, July 22, 2011

The Little Buzzing Bee-a poem

Friday, July 22, 2011
 
         If you look carefully, this little bee is in the bottom middle.  I worked in the flower beds, noticing so many insects going about their lives as I was, and couldn't help but begin a small poem in tribute to the bees, connecting to our lives too.  Here is the way I looked at them.



The little buzzing bee
understands the formality
of daily life.

She buzzes from flower to flower
questing for the gold
with little strife.

She realizes
the point of
all her activities:
a need to eat,
a need to rest,

a need to live.

With the buzzing
of this delicate fluttering,
she sends a message
to all children
gathered on
the summer sunlit
greenness of their lives-
to live for the beauty of the moment.

Tuesday, July 19, 2011

Beginning Lessons-This from our cabin

Slice of Life Tuesday, July 19, 2011


          I thought I’d begin to write some lessons for beginning the school year in writing workshop, and then write for the lesson, too.   

          This lesson concerns students creating a visual of something that inspires them, something that helps the words come together in a satisfying way because they care about the topic.  They can take their own photos, sketch something that invites a memory, or look at sites like Flickr for photos that motivate.      
          I recently spent time at our cabin in the Rockies, and took pictures that pleased me as I took a familiar walk near the cabin.  We’ve owned the cabin since our children were small, and I have so many memories of this place through the years.  Here are the photos, for which I wrote some haiku, a traditional form of poetry that is usually about nature; and 15 words or less poetry, an idea found on Laura Salas’ blog.   
The bridge carries us
    o’er the stream to the meadow’s
    blooms and butterflies.   

We anticipate
     Woodsy walks, and greenest sights
     Upon arriving.




Adventurous paths
    lead us on unplanned journeys
    to find new magic.







Imagine in this leafy green
the sweetest fairy, flute in hand
to accompany the wind.
My reading rock memory
shows Sarah with pillow and book
reading at her favorite place.
Softball laughter here-
memory of thwacking balls
Daisies were first base.

The brook flows down to splash
    on rocks and branches
    pushed in by winter’s thaw.






Visits here hold somber thoughts,
wondering what happiness is held
still buried in the foundation.








Monday, July 18, 2011

Beginning of The Year Workshop-Why Do We Write?

Monday, July 18, 2011



       One early lesson in writer’s workshop will include the topic of why we’ll do lots of writing during the year.  It’s important to me to start with a list developed with the class to keep in front of me, to aid me in crafting lessons that touch the ideas along with all the writing parts inherent in the path to finished pieces.  The list particularly fits a middle school level of understanding, but the same things could be re-worded to fit younger students more appropriately.

       Here are some of the reasons I believe will give students a base from which to jump into writing.  In my first meetings with students, the list will aid a discussion where we’ll add to the list, share brief examples that illustrate each point, and begin with an exercise from one idea.  Other school’s expectations may be different from mine, so it doesn’t matter where one starts with writing, just that students will know that they will be writing, and in doing so, will discover so much about themselves. 

Reasons to write: 

*    Reflecting to figure out how one feels about something that one reads or observes
*    Responding to something with one of the senses
*    Messing about with explaining one’s opinion-becoming clearer about it
*    Discovering and capturing parts of one’s past
*    Communicating learning about a topic
*    Capturing the essence of some personal experience
*    Capturing the imagined—story, character, setting, etc.